So I’ve finally begun with the revision process for Focus. I’ve updated my list of things to do to help keep track.

Revisions are tough, but good critiques make them easier. At least, good critiques will show a guy where to begin. But I’ve found that even good critiques can contradict each other. Even though I’m just starting, it’s beginning to look like this revision process will take at least as much time as writing Focus to begin with. I guess we’ll all find out soon enough.